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Friday 23 June 2017

the boy in the red coat

I  am  in the forest. I was abandoned from my mum’s massive mansion . It had gold ,rubies  every thing you want cars.I have the best bed ever.

I was so sad so I ran of  into the forest it was 90 metres away but I got there . All of a sudden I was lost so I ran to the left nope srate yess lets go.

I can’t  breath there is a water fountain I need a drink so badly. There was no where to go but I saw a hut so I went over there and I slept there for the night and woke up at 5:30 and got ready for  the day ok time to go explore.


I was near the end of the forest but I saw tigers and panthers of geez I don’t like this i gotta get out of here there is no way out.

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