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Thursday 3 August 2017

for the birds

this is the story we did on the 3rd the 8th  2017

There was a clear street with 300 power lines. It was a land of sand with nothing around. It was an empty desert. It was a hot place where it never went below 55 degrees and where a pond could dryed out in 5 minutes. It was amazing. It got hotter and hotter so it was 400 degrees. It could melt your body.


Then 2 birds were pushing their way to the power lines.They started to kick and push each other to get to the center, as it was the best view. Many more birds came and they where mean, small, angry and cute. Then a giant bird came. It smiled and was happy because the bird always wanted to find new friends. The little birds hated the big bird because they were so small and they wanted to be bigger. So they put the big bird in the center and shaved the big bird until it  was  upside down.


The little birds discusses what to do and two of the little birds started pecking at its feet, so he will fall because they thought it would be funny to see the big bird fall. The other birds were watching and talking. None of them stopped the two birds from pecking. The power lines zapped and they lost their feathers. It was raining birds with no feathers. They hid behind the big bird who fell onto the ground.


The little birds had to find a cave to live in as they had no feathers. They lived in the cave for the rest of their lives.

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