this is my story about Tom Trueheart
I can taste my brothers. I can smell their shoes
and I can hear them singing and whistling
They must be close. All of a sudden a humongous giant found me and put me in jail and my brothers were in jail too so I got out and freed my brothers.
We got out and ran super amazingly fast. We got to the shop to get some food at the shop but all I had was a giant boys tooth but they escaped with their princess brides from the shop keeper.
I feel hurt inside like my brothers inside. We ran so we could find resources for a tent and a base even when we get more stuff it was so dark I wasn't able to see so I made a base out of rocks. I eventually made a base with shiny mini planes and mini tanks. Time to attack brothers let’s go and destroy the humans! Yeahh. Time now to run away
Good a mouse I can go to victory.
The end
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 31 March 2017
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