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Thursday 9 August 2018

A great story


Hello and welcome to my blog. I have written  my own story that I wrote when i was board in 2016.




THE STORY


Once there lived a black cat named
Blacky. He ran to  a wheelie bin and knocked it onto the street.  Two cars crashed into a fence, and when Blacky saw what he had done he came to Shane, his owner.  Shane smacked Blacky's bum and Blacky sprinted away to a shop. The next day Blacky ran home and got in trouble, lots of trouble, and ran away again to Shane's friends house.  He stayed there for 1 week. The next day Blacky came home and played with his friends’ next door neighbor at 1pm. They played tag the tail and then Shane went to mcdonalds and and blacky had chicken.  Next Blacky ran to the pond and caught fish and he took them to Shane.  Tomorrow is my birthday spoke Shane.Blacky ran to Shane and told him that it was his birthday Blacky got Shane a Lego mine craft end portal set and made it up then Jamie came and made a farm.Blacky was running away from the  river because it got on his paws and he got scared and ran. Shane was going to get Blacky away from the river and Shane went shopping and got Blacky  a catnip mouse. Blacky loved it and tore it to 1000 pieces.Shane made a old record player and a ps3 also.Blacky was angry because shane brought Blacky nothing in the shopping.Blacky was happy because  Shane brought a kitkat and Blacky a toy ball so blacky played with it and left it alone so shane throw it out and Blacky was so sad because shane was at his friend's house and Blacky was playing chase the tail and Blacky got bitten so Blacky was sad and then shane came home and Blacky told shane and shane told the kittens to go away. Soon Blacky got better and shane was nice to Blacky so Blacky got better and better.Blacky was better the next day so Blacky could play with his friends. The next day was swap day and shane swapped boxing gloves for a leather jacket and the color of the leather jacket was light brown shane was happy because he always wanted a leather jacket so he wore it everywhere he went and it made shane cool and he even took it to work and shane and the people at shane’s work said that it was cool and then shane went to the shop and got a kitkat for him and for Blacky got a catnip mouse for Blacky then Blacky played with his friends for fun and bit the kitten's tail and it bled so Blacky ran  far away up a mountain and he was in a
cloud and he thought that he was flying but he was not flying. He had fun on the mountain and he jumped of and ran back up and he rolled around on the mountain and shane went to find Blacky but he did not find him because he was on a big big mountain  so he was stuck on the mountains for ever and ever so he had to go toilet for a long time.Blacky was happy on the mountain and he was 10000m up a mountain and no one could
not hear him on the mountain so he cried  a lot because he is stuck forever and shane can not have him in his life.Blacky is stuck somewhere.Blacky where are you I mean it come here.Blacky was having so much fun on the mountain.

Blacky had a good time on the mountain but he ran home  and brought shane mcdonalds on the way home.Shane was happy that he got Blacky back home.
Shane got a toyota supra and he did drifts and car meets in it he won the toyota car drift chelling and it was in loving a flip on the road so he got a drifting rx7
and he was good in it and jamie had a birthday and he was 17 and he had his
Restricted then a got a  lamborghini
Once shane gave jamie the supra that flipped original they did races like rx7 vs supra. Jamie put quad turbo and shane put twin turbo.at shanes house they looked on trade me for a rx8
 It was 4905$ and we got it and it was good to cruise in and shane bring the supra and the rx7 to australia and did more car meets and a drift track it was crazy I won to a silver Porsche with twin turbo so I tried a red evo and it was so fast is i did a bit of a fire in the engine then it blew to bits .
We got a classic supra
With a free spoiler it was a speer one  I used the exhaust for my one . it is loud a herd of elephants crushing 500 cars. So we went to the rechers to get a car and they were all bad
but we got one of them and you it as a part car someone would buy it for $700 and they got it and we got a set of mags and  a spoiler
The next day i sold stuff which gave us $349  and we did a car show and steve was there with his sti and there was there with there porsche and it was amazing. the car show had cars for sale and i bought a mclaren 350s gt3. It was neo chrome  and silver it was aws one and it sounds like a set of armytrix exhausts with stainless steel caps. I drove it home and sold the rx8
So the next day i got blacky a toy car and he drove it and he played with my drone
It was cool then we had the time of our life having to scoot and do backflips on the scooters in a foam pit  it was awesome and me and blacky where were at the skatepark and blacky was famous for scooting on his gold scooter and he wants  to move houses so we did and we moved to 74 tauiwi cres in auckland and we got a free set of furniture from the old owner. then shane found a 1979 mazda rx7 series 1 and it was only $7832 dollars so shane got it then he decided to sell blackys toy  that was 24 dollars then blacky ran away to the pet shop to get another one and he stole it then he was sprinting home. Then shane had a girlfriend around and blacky came in the cat door as she came in and blacky and shane's girlfriend liked blacky a lot. Then shane sold all his cars for 178k dollars and then bought a 2002 subaru impreza wrx for 9.5k with 7000 miles on it. Shane got a spoiler and a set of mags  and a lowering system so he could go over speed bumps. Then blacky came with his friend misty witch is a gold and black tabby cat that loves shane alot. The jamie comes in his mazda miata mx5 and sees his cat misty with blacky and grabs misty and says to shane this is my cat why do you have misty? Just why. Im taking misty home and she is never to come back to this house :start up of the maita: im leaving and going home see ya later . shane feels strange because he  got drunk last night and fell asleep on the ground at 12.29 pm and woke up at 9.48 am and he was cold and once he woke up. Blacky was sitting on shane that he was -4 decrease so blacky dragged him into the house when the door was open and shane felt so warm after he had gone under the heat pump and then it started to snow and shane's car had the convertible roof down .so shane had to run outside and put the roof up and went inside his nice and toasty warm house. Then blacky comes up to shane and sleeps beside shane then jamie comes in the door and had misty with him. Misty and blacky loved to play together and the whole family came over for a huge family chicken that was bigger than misty . shane and jamie had a good day  and it was time too go to bed. the next day jamie woke up with blacky and misty on his tummy and he got off the couch to have some cereal for breakfast and i have ordered some apple watches on wish. God shane has
100k in his bank account and shane was so happy so he spent 5k on a modified chassis  body and wing then he got a RBW porsche 911 gt3 rs and paid 20k for the car



I hope you enjoyed it and please leave feedback in the comments and wake sure its helpful and positive. That's it for today I will see you all next time bye              

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jamie.I started reading your story about Blacky and Shane and I was enjoying it.Going by some of your writing I guess you are into cars.You have added some flash car models to your blog.I did find it a bit difficult to read some of the parts of your blog especially when the words were on a dark background.What make and model of car is your favorite and why?

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    1. thanks miss Cassidy for the feed back and my favorite car is a 1994 Mazda Maita Mx-5

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