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today in C.I.P we did this thing where we had to do a DLO about what kids can does to effect children that don't have anything
thank you for reading my post and I will see you next time!
Wednesday 7 August 2019
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Hi Jamie, I really like your blog post because it shows us what we can do to support kidscan. I like how you included school gear aswell because some people need it. I think next time you could maybe put a list on the side bullet pointing the things that they do. What else does Kidscan do and what can we do to support them?
ReplyDeleteHey Jamie I love your blog post and its really cool and that.It really shows us what kidscan does to this school. I have a question for you,why did you leave 2 things on the poster?
ReplyDeleteI Jamie, I enjoyed reading your blogpost and think I should more often. The thing that you may need to change is the intro when you wrote Today with lower case t and not a capital T. Other then that you did really well in the making of this blog post.
ReplyDeleteIf you knew how, how would you help people like that?
Jamie, you have gotten some great feedback from your peers. I enjoyed seeing you share your work on your blog and getting some positive, thoughtful and helpful feedback.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to seeing more CIP blogs in the future.
- Miss Birtch
Dear Jamie... This is an amazing blog post. I like the info for why we should donate to Kids can. I like the images that give you a hint of why we need to donate to theam. The images also show what we should donate to theam.
ReplyDelete-Shikarn.
Hey Jamie I like your blog post.I like the part how you said what kids can does and what they give to kids in need.Next time could you please add more colour.
ReplyDeleteCan you add a photo or a bit more information on what you did.
What did you like the most?
Hi Jamie Jesse here from Tz. This is a really cool poster I like how you wrote that good stuff about them and that gives us a reason of why we should donate to them not much to fix up specking of fixing up you need to have a capital letter at the start of a sentience anyway good blog post. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteHey Jamie I love your blog post and its really cool and that.It really shows us what kidscan does to this school. I have a question for you,why did you leave 2 things on the poster?
ReplyDelete1 gold coin donations
2 the date of the event