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Friday, 11 September 2020

Silent Slaughter

 

So in hurumanu 4 we have been writing stories about heroes and villains story. This is my story and my drawings. I'm proud of my story.


Silent Slaughter



No one knows Dave the tall muscular 38 year old man with gray haired guy,wearing all black clothing with a cops belt with a gun in the holster that he stole from a dead cop. He looks out his camper van window at 9:35pm. He goes for his nightly walk. His walk isn’t normal; he walks with his back pushed in and his arms swinging around crazily.


One dark, cold and windy night people were slumming around the extremely blazing hot campfire. Dave snuck up behind one of the five people and pushed them into a blazing hot fire and burnt them to a crisp without no one noticing Dave pushed that innocent person into the blazing hot fire.

       

Then he was silent, not even a trace of Dave has been found. One month later he starts to kill innocent people again. He starts to kidnap and murder people sneakily and silently. Some people heard screaming from somewhere. The cops came and tried to get in his trailer but it was locked (Dave wasn't in the trailer) The cops couldn’t find him.


Dave tries to push another person into the campfire but gets caught. The innocent person calls the police and gets them to come as soon as they can. Dave starts to run and hide. When the police arrive they search the entire trailer park and then Nigel finds Dave in the most random place under someone's trailer. Dave refuses to get arrested but Nigel takes Dave to the cop car. Dave gets sentenced to prison for 25 years.



Here are my drawings of my hero and my villain

Hero

Villain


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