Today in community time we have to write about the life of a shoe and what it does when were not around.
so here is my story about my Nike air max
(I) is the shoes
I have been hiding under the television cabinet because my owner wears we to much and i smell so much i gonna have a shower. aah that better ooooooooooo i see a computer i gonna use this. hmm what should i play ooo im gonna play car mechanic simulator 2018 daym that lag tho i cant play it. im gonna go to go to sketchers party after i do my hair and i put deodorant on then i will drive the miata to da party.
Friday, 21 June 2019
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Hi Jamie
ReplyDeleteI like how you introduced the task and also clarified that I was the shoe (writing in first person). Make sure that you always put a capital letter when you are saying "I" as it is just like a name in that context.
Keep up the great blogging!
- Miss Birtch